Journal 1 - Dinesen, Drug Addict, Young Wizard, Weres in Rome and Vampires in Paris

 

7/19/2000

The Angelic Avengers by Isak Dinesen

[Note- brought at Karen Blixen museum]



               Mr. Armsworthy seems to be very much like the Duke in Browning’s “My Last Duchess”  That same air of look at what I have to offer.  He also manipulates her when he brings in the subject of Lucan’s brothers.

               Interesting how both women cannot be strong at the same time.  Zorine begins a f lightly character and yet gains in strength as the book progresses.  Lucan begins to become weak.

               The book is gothic.  But the romance between Noel and Lucan is not very believable.  Noel does not seem to be much better a choice then Armsworthy.  Both seek to control her reaction about stating their feelings  Noel comes off worse because he is already spoken for and yet is writing to declare is love. He places a burden on her.  Romance between Noel and Lucan seems to be contrived.  And a great many of the characters appear to be selfish.  Zosine’s father in leaving her behind, Zosine in her running away, Lucan seems to forget about her brothers, Noel is taking Lucan for granted.

               Zosine’s sudden departure of faith in the old couple is not well done.  It seems too sudden and lack conceivable proof.  However her relationship with the Baron is far more believable than Lucan’s.

               But the whole plot seems to contrived.  Writing is beautiful but the plot when compared to her other works lacks.

 

7/10/2000

Confessions of an English Opium Eater  by Thomas De Quincy

De Quincey


               De Quincy states that discipline at his Manchester school was controlled by the elder boys, sounds very much like Dr Bill’s (mentioned in Byatt).

               De Quincy apologizes for alliteration in one place, saying that he did not intend to use many “Ps” o on purpose, it just happened.

               Very good in some places , esp. in regards to the story of Anne.  Yet seems to drag in some points.  Loses its focus.




7/12/2000

Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone by J K Rowling

[Note - this before the author's posts in 2020.]

               “He hurried to his car and set off for home, hoping he was imagining things which had had never hoped before because he didn’t approve of imagination” (5).

Refers to Mr. Dursley

Sentence variation needed.

“there will be books written about Harry  - every child in out world will know his name” (13) = psychic

“What happened down in the dungeons between you and Professor Quirrell is a complete secret so naturally the whole school knows” (296).

               All in all a pretty good book.

               Sometimes the writing needs variation in words.

               Good characterization and plot.  Like the fact that Harry was not responsible for Gwforydor attaining the final points need to win  but Neville did.

               While the characters at least in this book, seem to be pigeon holed into types but are still well drawn.

               Some very funny moments and like the fact that Hermione did contribute a lot.  I hope that Rowling doesn’t pair her off with Harry but with Ron [Note – but then Ron was a weak will douche and Hermione deserves so much better than Ron or Harry].

               Rowling does seem to draw upon other fantasy novels but combines them pretty well.  Also some movies, remember something similar, done earlier, something involving witches.

               Of the course the question arises why Harry was sent back to his family for the summer.  Wouldn’t both happy to not do so?

 

7/12/2000

Night of the Wolf by Alice Borchardt


Mother of Rome by Biggi


[Note – sequel to Silver Wolf, author was Anne Rice's sister]

               Involves from a novel about Mainel to one about Dryas.  Full circle of the novel Mainel goes from leading a pack of wolves to a pack of humans.  Interesting use of historical characters.  But cannot see how Cleopatra would fall in love with Anthony.  What I would really like to see is how Maniel formed the pack.

               Characterization is good but at times the plot becomes confusing.  Whole sequence with Calpurnia was not really needed and seemed a little out of place.  Does not seem to match the historical figure.

               Interesting how both novels take place in Rome.

               Nice to see the development of Maniel.  Revealing his origin but yet keeping part of him a mystery.

 

7/15/2000

Hotel Transylvania by Chelsea Quinn Yarbro




               First of the books about the Count.  Good in the sense that the Count does not yet have to defend his secret but simply rescue the girl. 

               Madeline herself suffers more from the Devil Worshippers than society.  But wish a reason for her “death” was given.  Neither like or dislike Madeline, though she seems more mature in Out of the House of Life  Yarbro does not seem to have done that much with her.  Olivia has four books, Madeline two.  Olive is far more interesting.  Madeline’s seems like a child.  Does she truly think about her choice?

               Like the contrast between the alchemists and Satanists.

               Why doesn’t the Count transform into a wolf in other books?

               Particularly good characterization esp. in regards to the minor characters.

               Seems to be somewhat happier Count in this novel.  Like how she explains about the real Count at the end of the book.           

               Some of the bad guys, particularly the young men could have been more individualized.  The young ones seem to be so much alike.  Unless Yarbro chose to portray them this way so the reader could see why Madeline is disenchanted with society.  But even then it feels fake, rationally we know that not everyone is alike.

               Madeline’s father, if he wanted to keep her truly safe would’ve one would have left the country.  He does not seem to have taken the threat as seriously as he should have.  I think more mention should have been made of Madeleines’ mothers, she seems like the Disney mothers.  Though the aunt did take over some of her roles.

               Particularly like the character of Hercules, his wiliness to prove himself.  Also like his relationship with Md. Lairriez. I wish Yarbro had developed this a bit more.  Or perhaps it is but left to the reader’s imagination.

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